GIẢI ĐỀ THI THỰC TOEIC WRITING 9.3.2025

Hôm nay mình sẽ hướng dẫn các bạn giải câu số 8, câu viết bài essay trích từ đề thi thực TOEIC Writing của buổi thi TOEIC Speaking và Writing ngày 9/3/2025 nhé!

Trong bài viết này chúng ta sẽ cùng nhau phân tích đề thi TOEIC WRITING – QUESTION 8. Đây là một trong những chủ đề essay khả năng cao sẽ ra lại vì vậy chúng ta hãy cùng nhau phân tích dàn bài, cụm từ liên quan tới chủ đề để rèn luyện kỹ năng viết nhé:

Do you agree that people can become successful writers with enough practice? Give reasons and/or examples to support your opinion.

Đề thi thực TOEIC Writing 9.3.2025 câu số 8

Một vài đề thi tương tự có thể ra trong tương lai:

Which do you think contributes more to a famous athlete’s success: luck or hard work? Why? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most famous musicians are the most talented. Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.
Which of the following has the greatest influence on whether or not an author is successful? Choose ONE of the options provided below, and give specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.
- A passion for writing
- Persistence (kiên trì)
- Support from friends and family

Dàn bài mẫu cho bài essay:

Agree – Lập luận đồng ý với quan điểm

Writing skill will improve if you practice a lot.

Regular practice => help you understand your style
Ex: Stephen King, J.K Rowling write every day => become successful

2. Feedback => learn from mistakes

Long time => receive constructive feedbacks about their mistakes => write better

3. Hard work outweigh natural talent or external factors (luck, background)

Some pp have talent, luck but if they do not practice => can’t maintain their success.

Các từ vựng hữu ích đối với chủ đề này

Phrase	Nghĩa
Consistent effort, learning from mistakes, persistent (kiên trì) hard work	Nỗ lực liên tục, học hỏi từ phản hồi và làm việc chăm chỉ bền bỉ
Require regular training	Cần luyện tập thường xuyên
Become successful overnight	Thành công sau một đêm
Refine their skills/work/craft	Trau dồi kỹ năng của họ
Aspiring writers	Những nhà văn đầy tham vọng
Learning from mistakes	Học hỏi từ sai lầm
Analyzing your errors	Phân tích lỗi sai
Receive constructive feedbacks	Nhận phản hồi mang tính xây dựng
Writers can identify their weaknesses	Các nhà văn xác định điểm yếu
Best-selling authors	Các tác giả có sách bán chạy nhất
Continuous learning	Học tập không ngừng
Struggle to succeed	Chật vật để thành công
Hard work and persistence	Làm việc chăm chỉ và kiên trì
Face multiple/many rejections	Đối mặt với nhiều lần bị từ chối
Keep improving	Không ngừng cải thiện
Perseverance and determination	Sự kiên trì và quyết tâm
Face/encounter difficulties/challenges	Đối mặt với khó khăn
Write effectively	Viết một cách hiệu quả
Achieve success	Đạt được thành công

Sample essay – Trả lời mẫu đề thi thực TOEIC Writing câu số 8

Question: Do you agree that people can become successful writers with enough practice? Give reasons and/or examples to support your opinion.

(30 phút – 300 chữ)

Sample essay:

Opening – Mở bài

Lead – in: Many people believe that writing is a talent that only a few possess (sở hữu).

Thesis: However, I strongly agree that anybody can become a successful writer with enough practice.

Outline: Like any other skill, writing improves over time through consistent effort, learning from mistakes, and persistent hard work.

Body – Thân bài

Paragraph 1: consistent effort

Topic sentence: Firstly, writing skill can develop with practice.

Explain/Example: Just like playing an instrument or learning languages, writing requires regular training to improve. Many famous/well-known writers, such as Stephen King, did not become successful overnight. Instead, they spend years practicing and refining their craft. (By+ Ving) By writing daily, experimenting with different styles and expanding their vocabulary, aspiring writers can significantly enhance/boost their skills.

Paragraph 2: learning from mistakes

Topic sentence: Secondly, feedback and learning from mistakes can be essential for success in writing.

Explain/Example: Writers often refine their work by analyzing errors and receiving constructive criticism from others. Writing workshops, editing, and professional reviews help identify their weaknesses and improve their style. For example, many best-selling authors work closely with editors who guide them in make their writing more engaging and polished. Without this process of continuous learning, even the most talented writers would struggle to succeed.

Paragraph 3: persistent hard work

Topic sentence: Finally, hard work and persistence are more important than natural talent and other external factors.

Explain/Example: While some people may have natural ability for storytelling, long-term success in writing depends on dedication. J.K. Rowling, for example, faced multiple rejections before her first Harry Porter book was published. Instead of giving up, she kept improving her manuscript until she finally achieved success. This shows that perseverance and determination can help writers reach their goals, even if they face difficulties along the way.

Conclusion

Restate: In conclusion, becoming a successful writer is not about talent alone. With continuous learning, enough practice, and determination, anyway can develop the skills needed to write effectively and achieve success in the field.

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